Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Week Sixteen - Final Draft of Script - The White "V"

The White V
by
Gavilan 1B Students

Ana Cerda
Cynthia Heredia
Fernando Chavez
Jeanette Martinez
Nereyda Camacho


INT. SCENE – DESCRIPTION
It’s spring time at Bellview high. The sun is shining, birds are chirping, and students are trudging to their first period class with a slight hangover from the weekend. Scene begins with two particular students, Ashley and Mary, walking to their first period biology class talking about the Senior promenade.
                              
ASHLEY
Hey! Wasn’t prom awesome?!

MARY
Yes! I thought it wasn’t going to be fun, but it was.

ASHLEY
Mhmm… But after prom was the best part.

MARY
Because you got to go home and rest…?

ASHLEY
No! Silly! Jason and I finally did it! I can’t wait to tell everyone! I won’t be branded with the white V!

MARY
Whoa, you had sex?!

ASHLEY
Yes! It was great. We rented a room and yeah…

MARY
What about your parents? Didn’t they know prom was over at 2?

ASHLEY
Yeah, of course they knew. My mom was totally encouraging getting the hotel room. My parents aren’t old-fashioned like yours!

MARY
Hey, be nice! Why is it so weird that I agree with them that my first time should be special? Anyways…how was it?

ASHLEY
It’s just weird! That’s so last decade. But yeah, it was great! It was everything I thought it would be and more!
MARY
Well, it’s official! I’m the only virgin at Bell View High…

ASHLEY
Shh, don’t say that out loud!...Don’t worry, you have a week until you turn 18, there must be someone who’s down!(Laughs)
MARY
I don’t want to just do it out of pressure though, you get me?

ASHLEY
Yeah, but you don’t want to be marked as a virgin do you?

MARY
No, but still…it looks like that V is going to be mine. Ugh.

The bell rang as they walked into their class and took their seats. As the day went by, Mary was still thinking about her dilemma. She didn’t want to be branded with the white V. You only had to wear it for one day, but the Senior Committee made sure that a picture of you wearing the V was placed in the yearbook. Endless humiliation. But you had to stand your ground for what you believe in, right?
                                       
SHOT – DESCRIPTION
One week later Mary wakes up surprisingly excited to be legal. Most would be dreading the branding of the white V, but Mary wasn’t about to let that ruin her birthday. So she went to school with a smile on her face.

ASHLEY
Happy Birthday Mary! Have they found out it’s your birthday yet?
(She is referring the Senior Committee, the Seniors in charge of marking virgins with a white V if they’re still virgins when they turn 18.)

MARY
Thanks! Yeah, they’re announcing it today at lunch.

ASHLEY
I’m sorry Mary…

MARY
It’s okay. I have an idea…

EXT. SCENE –
At lunch time, Mary and Ashley slowly walk to the cafeteria where the crowd has already gotten wild.

CROWD
Reveal the virgin! Virgin! Virgin! Virgin!

BRITNEY
(From the Senior Committee)
We present to you…Virgin Mary!

CROWD
(Laughs) How ironic! Virgin Mary!

MARY
(Pushes her way through the crowd)
I don’t care if you think it’s old fashioned. I love myself and don’t think any of you are worthy of my virginity.
(Walks up to the podium and places the white V on herself and walks away with her head held high)

Her brave act opened the doors for more of her peers to have the strength to not give in to the peer pressure of having sex. That white V no longer only stood for Virgin, but stood for Valiant as well.

END OF SCENE



Roles:
Writers: Fernando and Jeanette
Director: Nereyda
Editors: Jeanette and Cynthia
Set/Costume Designer: Cynthia and Jeanette(only by writing descriptions in the script)
Actors: Ana(Main actress) and all others, excluding Jeanette

Week Fifteen

Pending

Week Fourteen - Final Draft of Research Paper

Jeanette Martinez
Professor Stacey Knapp
English 1B
M/W 12:50-2:10
15 May 2011
The Scarlet Letter
The Scarlet Letter, a well known novel by Nathaniel Hawthorne , is a novel that can be interpreted in many ways. The Scarlet Letter itself is ultimately a story about the consequences a woman has to face when she makes a mistake. Hester Prynne, the main character of the novel, endures the shame the Puritan society places upon her for committing adultery. The Puritan society she lived in greatly looked down upon Hester’s sin: an extra-marital affair that resulted in a pregnancy. Hester was imprisoned and came out of that imprisonment with courage. She walked out of prison looking beautiful, with her head held high, and her baby in her arms. Hester also stood her ground and protected her baby’s father; she would not reveal his identity, however, he ultimately confesses his sin. On the inside, Hester was also ashamed of herself, and felt that she was deserving of her punishment, which included wearing an embroidered letter “A” on her bosom. This embroidered scarlet letter “A” marked her as an adulterer, an emblem with a significance that all could see. Along with shame and punishment, love is also an important part of the novel. Hester loved Pearl, and also loved Pearl’s father, Arthur Dimmesdale, one of the Puritan ministers. This forbidden love, unknown to the rest of the society, played a huge part in The Scarlet Letter, which is why Hawthorne calls it a romance. The Scarlet Letter is about the strife women face in society, their strength, and also, the strength of love. The reception and criticism of The Scarlet Letter has led to much controversy between critics; some say that Nathaniel Hawthorne is a Patriarchal sexist, others say he’s a feminist, other’s say that feminism drives the story…Which is it? After reading The Scarlet Letter, I found that I agree with the argument that feminism drives the story; the main character is a feminist, as is the author himself.
One critic, Orestes Brownson, a 19th century critic, does not care to praise Hawthorne on his writing, instead he criticizes Hawthorne’s portrayal of morals in the story. Although it may not have been Brownson’s intention, his criticism of Hawthorne’s portrayal of morals led me to believe that Hawthorne is a feminist. Brownson says:  
The adulteress suffers not from remorse, but from regret, and from the disgrace to which her crime has exposed her…The minister, her accomplice, suffers also, horribly…but not from the fact of the crime itself, but from the consciousness of not being what he seems to the world…Neither ever really repents of the criminal deed; nay, neither ever regards it as really criminal, and both seem to hold it to have been laudable, because they loved one another…Mr. Hawthorne in the present case seeks to excuse Hester Prynne, a married woman, for loving the Puritan minister, on the grounds that she had no love for her husband…sin is sin, and that it is pardonable only through the great mercy of God. (p.251)
It is evident that Hawthorne does indeed excuse Hester’s actions because of her situation. He does not see the world as black-and-white when it comes to morals and sins, a viewpoint that is not uncommon in society today…mostly in women.  In society today, a woman that committed adultery would most certainly not be punished in the manner that Hester was, but men tend to be more old-fashioned when it comes to women’s behavior and not fall for the excuses a woman may have for sinning. Because it is common for men to feel that way, I feel that Hawthornes’s opposing viewpoints on morals is evidence that he is a feminist, and also that Hester herself is a feminist. Nina Baym from the New England Quarterly also feels that the manner in which Hawthorne portrays women indicates that he is a feminist. She too knows that people have called him a “patriarchal sexist”, but does not think that a patriarchal author could have created a character such as Hester. She insists that Hester’s character is made to “signify something entirely different – able, admirable”, which leads her to claim that the novel itself is characterized by feminism.
Hester could be considered a feminist because of how she dealt with her situation. Her forbidden and hidden affair with the minister led to a pregnancy that could not be hidden from anyone with eyes. Hester’s punishment was time in prison and the shame of having to wear a scarlet letter “A” that put her sin in the spotlight for everyone to see. Although she often dwelled on the actions that made her an outcast from society, she stood strong and kept her ground. When she was released from prison, she was described as:
…tall, with a figure of perfect elegance on a large scale. She had dark and abundant hair, so glossy that it threw off the sunshine with a gleam, and a face which besides being beautiful from regularity of feature and complexion, had the impressiveness belonging to a marked brow and deep black eyes. She was lady-like too, after the manner of the feminine gentility of those days; characterized by a certain state and dignity…her attire…seemed to express the attitude of her spirit, the desperate recklessness of her mood…that SCARLET LETTER so fantastically embroidered and illuminated upon her bosom. (Hawthorne 40-41)
I’m sure feminists would find Hester’s release from jail impressive. Hester came out looking strong and beautiful; she left the on looking crowd speechless by her beauty and unabashed, haughty smile. This shows that even though they tried to put her down for her sins, she still found her way to shine, especially by making the shameful “A”, a beautiful “A”. A criticism of The Scarlet Letter by Robert S. Levine also notes that “Hester’s dissident side…associates her with antebellum feminism” (P 276).
However, Hester could also be seen as anti-feminist because she too looks down at her actions.
Here, she said to herself, had been the scene of  her guilt, and here should be the scene of her earthly punishment; and so, perchance, the torture of her daily shame would at length purge her sould, and work out another purity than that which she had lost; more saint-like, because of martyrdom. (Hawthorne 56)
On the contrary, it still takes a strong woman to stay in that community and bear the punishment instead of fleeing. Not only did she stay and endured her punishment, Hester also made herself useful to the community. She was handy with the needle and was frequently asked to make garments. She also always shared the little that she had to the poor. Eventually, Hester’s good deeds made her one bad deed fade away, yet she continued to wear the scarlet letter. Perhaps because the letter “A” not only represented adultery, but it stood for Arthur, which was Minister Dimmesdale’s first name, whom she loved enough to protect from shame and humiliation.
Love is also a major part of the novel. There is the maternal love between Hester and her daughter Pearl and there is also the romantic love between Hester and Arthur Dimmesdale, her partner in sin. There is nothing like a mother's love, a love that is strong, forgiving, and never ending. However, as we read, Hester often found herself asking herself if Pearl was a demon offspring. When she looked into Pearl’s eyes she saw “a face, fiend-like, full of smiling malice” in them, which would bring doubts into Hester’s mind (Hawthorne 66). Nevertheless, Hester kept Pearl. “I will not give her up!...What are a mother's rights, and how much the stronger they are, when that mother has but her child and the scarlet letter” (Hawthorne 76). Pearl, being the creation of Hester and Arthur’s forbidden love, is what connects them all together, which makes it important that they all love each other. Hester truly loved Arthur, and he reciprocated the feelings.  “He loves thee, my little Pearl, and loves thy mother too” (Hawthorne 135). Hester hated to see Arthur suffer. She proposed that they leave it all behind and start again. “Let us not look back, the past is gone!..I undo it all, and make it as it had never been!” (Hawthorne 130). Hester wanted them to be able to be a happy family together, in a place where they need not hide their prohibited relationship. Throughout all those years, Hester was a strong and independent single mother, despite the struggle of having to face a society that looked down on her, a society that did not see her fit to be a mother, a society that thought that little Pearl was a child of the devil. This leads to me repeat that it is quite evident that Hester embodied all the ideal attributes of a feminist. The reason that she then wanted to leave the society that had isolated her for so many years is not that she could no longer face the hardships, but because she knew that it was the only way Dimmesdale would be with them, she knew that the happiness and love of her family was more important than continuing to pay for a mistake they had made years prior.
            Ultimately, The Scarlet Letter is ruled by feminism and love, and could not have been written from a patriarchal author. Critics may oppose that statement but I feel that any way you interpret The Scarlet Letter, it will lead you back to both feminism and love because they are intertwined in this novel. Hester’s feminist strength that helps her through her punishment is born from both the maternal love for Pearl, and the forbidden love she feels towards Arthur Dimmesdale…all of which are the creation of Hawthorne’s mind. Therefore, I make the concluding statement that feminism and love are the main components of The Scarlet Letter.
Works Cited
Bayme, Nina. "Revisiting Hawthorne's Feminism." The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. 540-58. Print.
Brownson, Orestes. "From Brownson's Quarterly." The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. 250-53. Print.
DeSalvo, Louise. "Nathaniel Hawthorne and the Feminists: The Scarlet Letter." The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. 500-12. Print.
Hawthorne, Nathaniel. The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. Print.
Levine, Robert S. "Antebellum Feminists on Hawthorne: Reconsidering the Reception of The Scarlet Letter." The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. 270-90. Print.

Week Thirteen

Pending

Monday, May 9, 2011

Week Twelve - Glogster and Annotated Bibliography #3

Glogster in place of difficulty paper #3:
http://jeanettem11.glogster.com/hesterafeminist/

Annotated Bibliography:

Brownson, Orestes. "From Brownson's Quarterly." The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. 250-53. Print.
In his criticism, 19th Century critic Orestes Brownson, from Brownson’s Quarterly, does not care to praise Hawthorne on his writing, instead he criticizes Hawthorne’s portrayal of morals in the story. Brownson says:  
The adulteress suffers not from remorse, but from regret, and from the disgrace to which her crime has exposed her…The minister, her accomplice, suffers also, horribly…but not from the fact of the crime itself, but from the consciousness of not being what he seems to the world…Neither ever really repents of the criminal deed; nay, neither ever regards it as really criminal, and both seem to hold it to have been laudable, because they loved one another…Mr. Hawthorne in the present case seeks to excuse Hester Prynne, a married woman, for loving the Puritan minister, on the grounds that she had no love for her husband…sin is sin, and that it is pardonable only through the great mercy of God. (p.251)
Brownson’s whole criticism is spent on criticizing Hawthorne’s portrayal of morals in The Scarlet Letter. He does not like the fact that it seems that Hawthorne justifies Hester’s sin by the fact that she and the minister loved each other. He says that Hawthorne does not understand Christianity, remorse, and confession at all. He does not offer one word of praise for Hawthorne and even ends his criticism with that.

Week Eleven - Glogster and Annotated Bibliography #2

Glogster in place of difficulty paper #2:
http://jeanettem11.glogster.com/scarletletter-love/

Annotated Bibliography:


Bayme, Nina. "Revisiting Hawthorne's Feminism." The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. 540-58. Print.
In this criticism, Nina Baym opposes the idea that many reject Nathaniel Hawthorne as a male feminist. She says that Hawthorne made a distinction between the types of women: dark and fair. The dark ladies are “real”, while the fair ladies are “a ‘social myth’ invented to discipline ‘real’ women.” Baym feels that because of how Hawthorne portrays women, he is a feminist. She knows that people have called him a patriarchal sexist, but does not think that a patriarchal author could have created a character such as Hester. She insists that Hester’s character is made to “signify something entirely different – able, admirable”, which leads her to claim that the novel itself is characterized by feminism. 

Thursday, May 5, 2011

Week Ten - Difficulty Paper and Annotated Bibliography #1

Difficulty Paper:
The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne was extremely difficult for me to read. I just could NOT concentrate on it. When I tried to read a page, I would find myself spacing out and would have to go back and reread it. The repetitive process of having to reread pages and chapters over and over again made reading The Scarlet Letter a very long process. It is very uncommon for me to spend that much time trying to get through a book. I just finished it last week, which has caused me to get behind on my blog posts. Now that I have gone through it, I can write about the difficulties I encountered reading it.

One of the things that made The Scarlet Letter difficult to read was Nathaniel Hawthorne’s writing style. The language is confusing and he often uses uncommon words that I hadn’t heard of, but after the reader gets used to the old English and has a dictionary available, or simply uses context clues to figure out the meanings of the strange words, it is not a major problem. What most made reading The Scarlet Letter boring to me was the amount of description. There is so much description in this novel that I find is completely unnecessary. Many praise him for his exquisite descriptions in writing, but I just found that it just made the story drag along. I found that the main story of The Scarlet Letter itself was rather interesting and moving, especially from the feminist and sociological point of views. If the story was condensed into less description and perhaps more action, it would make a much better read. But that’s just my opinion.

Annotated Bibliography:

Hawthorne, Nathaniel. The Scarlet Letter and Other Writings. A Norton Critical Edition ed. New York: W. W. Norton &, 2005. Print.

The Scarlet Letter is a romance that is about more than just love. It is about the hardships that Hester Prynne, the main character, has to face for committing adultery in a Puritan society. Hester had an extra-marital affair that resulted in a pregnancy and of course, that was evidence that everyone in town could see after a few months, but the father of the child was unknown. Hester was punished by being jailed and forced to wear an embroidered letter A. The A stood for adultery/er and was there for everyone to see, for Hester to be set apart from the rest of the PURE-itan society. Hester was asked to reveal the name of her child’s father, but she refused. When released from prison, Hester chose not to flee the place in which she was looked down upon. Rather, she chose to stay because she felt that staying and bearing her punishment was necessary to purge her soul. As the years pass, Hester notices that her child’s father becomes weak with guilt, and proposes that they leave the past behind, move and start their lives over. They agree to it and they feel much better. However, when the father, who is Dimmesdale, the town minister, finally reveals to everyone that he committed adultery with Hester Prynne, he passes away. Hester and Pearl moved away, but the story ends with Hester returning and ultimately being buried next to Dimmesdale’s grave.